Friday, February 24, 2012
Manis (Ep. 1)
26 Disember 2016 Azan Subuh berkumandang. Ahmad membuka matanya. Dia melihat Anis masih lagi tidur, sambil memeluk anak kecil mereka; Maisarah. Ahmad memandang mereka berdua seketika, mengira setiap tarikan dan hembusan nafas. Dia senyum.
Ahmad: Anis. Anis. Bangun.
Anis: Pukul brapa skarang?
Ahmad: Subuh dah masuk. Jom.
Anis: OK.
Ahmad: Careful. Takut Maisarah terjaga.
Mereka bersiap sedia lalu solat Subuh bersama-sama. Selepas solat, mereka menghadap satu sama lain. Masih lagi di atas sejadah. Ahmad mengalih pandangannya kepada Maisarah yang masih lagi nyenyak tidur di atas katil.
Ahmad: Anis, tengok anak kita tu.
Anis: Dah 2 tahun dah dia, Bang. Perut Anis ni masih lagi dapat rasa kehadiran dia. Ingat lagi first time dia sepak-sepak dalam perut Anis?
Ahmad: Of course la Abang ingat. Takkan lupa sampai bila-bila. Allah, syok betul la time tu!
Anis: Time flies kan?
Ahmad menyandarkan badannya ke dinding, menghadap Anis. Di belakang Anis, Maisarah sedang nyenyak tidur di atas katil.
Ahmad: Yeah. Pejam celik pejam celik, tengok-tengok dia dah besar.
Ahmad menghembuskan nafas berat di dada.
Anis: Abang, is everything okay?
Ahmad: Huh? Oh, it's nothing. Abang tengah fikir something.
Anis: Apa dia?
Ahmad: Tak penting sangat.
Anis: Abang, dah 3 tahun dah Anis dok ngan Abang. Anis takda la expert, tapi Anis dah boleh baca muka Abang. Kalau bendanya tak penting, Abang takkan risau sampai macam tu skali.
Ahmad tersenyum.
Ahmad: Obvious sangat ek?
Anis: To me, yes.
Ahmad: Alahai, senang benor nak terkantoi ngan awak ni ye?
Anis: Come on la. I am your other half. The better half.
Ahmad: Hekeleh...
Anis tergelak kecil. Ahmad tersenyum mendengar gelak tawanya. Comel.
Ahmad: OK la. Abang bagitau. Meh sini, dok tepi Abang.
Anis duduk di tepi suaminya. Sama-sama bersandar di dinding.
Ahmad: Sejak kebelakangan ni, Abang dok fikir sesuatu. Sesuatu yang kurang menyenangkan hati.
Anis: Apa dia?
Ahmad: Akan datang harinya bila Maisarah akan tanya, macam mana kita boleh bertemu dan macam mana kita boleh bersatu.
Anis: ...
Anis meletakkan kepalanya di atas bahu Ahmad. Mereka berdua memandang Maisarah di hadapan mereka, yang masih lagi tidur. Kedengaran bunyi detikan jam di dinding.
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ReplyDeletecan't wait for the next episodes.. :)
ReplyDeletesweet ^_^
ReplyDeletesimple story, but full of meaning :)
ReplyDeletewahhh ending episod 1 enuh tnda tanya...pelbagai prediction leh jadi ni..hehe... salam ziarah saudara amirul (^_^)
ReplyDeleteArghh. Tergantung. Can't wait for 2nd episode, cepat! Kahakahkah.
ReplyDeleteinteresting. ada sejarah bunyinya. waiting for the next ep. keep on writing.
ReplyDelete-najm-
yuppp yupp..next episode please! :)
ReplyDeleteall r eager to know the nex part :) nicee aiman!
ReplyDeletebest.. cpt2 lah buat sambungan.. :)
ReplyDeletewahh..permulaan dh misteri nih...nice
ReplyDeleteakan terus membaca sebab banyak manfaat yang boleh diambil sebagai pengajaran untuk diri dan orang lain juga =]
ReplyDeletexsabarnye nak baca sambungannye.
ReplyDeleteTahniah untuk entri yg ke 100
simple but meaningful. You leave all of us eager to wait for the next episodes. Congrates brother Aiman. Cant wait for the next episodes... ;)
ReplyDeletecan't wait for the next episode~:)
ReplyDeleteAh terima kasih kerana memilih nama 'anis' :p my parents called me anis :)
ReplyDelete=)...pandai erk aiman buat cerita2=)..great!=)
ReplyDeletefaster faster! next episode pleaseeeee ^^
ReplyDeletedup dap dup dap. :P
ReplyDeleteI'm waiting for next
ReplyDeletebukan maisarah je tertanya-tanya... pembaca juga loh...tahniah Tuan Aiman...tuan arif dalam hal ini. Semoga usaha sama ini berterusan.
ReplyDeletewow....menarik la Aiman....teruskan.
ReplyDeleteWaiting for 101th post . Keep it up !
ReplyDeleteaiman you have a talent. Good job brother, =)
ReplyDeletelike.. ^^
ReplyDeletewaiting for next eposide!
P2BM
keep writing =)
ReplyDeletewah, ada siri baru... anyway, Maisarah. nice name :)
ReplyDelete~~nama sy actually.kuang3~ tq.
best3.. x sabar nk tunggu next episode.. cpt3.. :)
ReplyDeletewow. mmg suspen! <3
ReplyDeleteehhhh sambung new story pasal ahmad n anis la pulak~~~ sweet...
ReplyDelete\\(^__^)// pos yg ke0-100 ni mmg unexpected ...
wuuu bestnye cite ni! seriusli..tak sabar nak tengok sambungan die..
ReplyDeleteI asked my parents that question. and my dad replied with a ridiculous "bapak tgh main ragbi, mak lalu tepi padang, pastu kawan bapak suruh tackle. " =.=" But i guess Anis and Ahmad aren't the loyar buruk type, eh?
ReplyDeleteNext episodeee please! What got me even more excited is - I'm Maisarah too! tehee!
ReplyDeletesuka :) tak sabar nak bace ep.2 =)
ReplyDeletecan't wait for the next episod :)
ReplyDelete"Akan datang harinya bila Maisarah akan tanya, macam mana kita boleh bertemu dan macam mana kita boleh bersatu"
ReplyDeletesweet...ala2 'How i met ur mother' tp versi islamic.. xsabar tunggu next episode:)
the curiosity to know the whole story is killing me * exaggeration
ReplyDeletesuspicious : xde entri anis n ahmad kahwin kan? (takut terlepas)
ReplyDeleteah sweet :)
ReplyDeletesweetnye
ReplyDeletetak sabar tnggu smbungannye
abg aiman...seriously can't wait for the next entry! daebak...alhamdulillah!
ReplyDeleteso sweet... sedap kan nme maisarah tu? tu nme adek sy :D
ReplyDeletePastu??? *blurrr
ReplyDeleteThis was awesome. I'm looking forward for the next episode abg (:
ReplyDelete-NNS-
baru fefeling baca. tiba2... potong stim. ;p
ReplyDeletejeng2x
ReplyDeletemenunggu episod seterusnya....
ReplyDeleteManan Qayyim
Sungai Petani.
aiyak ... penantian mmg penyeksaan .. huhu =)
ReplyDeletemmm....sambungannye psl ank kecil tu ye? just guest...ahmad risau bila maisarah menginjak dewasa kan? just guest ^^
ReplyDeletebtw,salam alayk dan ziarah :)
cepatlaa sambung cerita. pleasee~ tak sabar dah nie!!!
ReplyDeletebila baca part anak nak tanya mcm mana jumpa..dah agak dah..next episode.hehe.Hurry,can't wait :) *can wait actually;D*
ReplyDeleteaarrghhh...cpat smbung~ (T___T)
ReplyDeletetak sabar nak tunggu...mohon cepat sambung....heee...
ReplyDeletesomeone told me that i like ahmad.... =)
ReplyDeletecant waitlaaa~
ReplyDelete^__^
ReplyDeleteLike! ^^.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next episode. Mabruk!
simple but nice.waiting :D
ReplyDeleteso nice... tak sabar nak tunggu episod seterusnya.
ReplyDeleteTak sabar tunggu next episode . Best2 . :)
ReplyDeletelorr.abes mcm tu.suspen! btw nice story. ^^
ReplyDeletesambung cepatttttttttttt
ReplyDeletesambungla~~~
ReplyDeletex sabar nak baca!!
episode 2...cepat!!
ReplyDeletexsabar lak..:)
akhirnye~~~
ReplyDeletemabruk alaik ya akhi, waiting for the next episode.. ^^
ReplyDeleteanother version that u can look forward to continue:
ReplyDeleteummi: adam, jum kita solat.
adam: ok ummi. kejap,adam nk ambil wudhuk.
beberapa minit selepas itu. adam berdiri di belakang ummi. sambil menarik2 telekung ummi,
adam: abi mane, ummi?
salam....Manis Ep.2 please :)
ReplyDeleteepisod 2 pliz,,@_@)"
ReplyDeletesuspen pulak..
ReplyDeletesaya fikir ada sambungannya lagi, rupanya tak :)
ReplyDeletenice one.
Teruskan karya anta.
Aslkm. Could you please add an English version as well? Some of my friends and I have just finished reading Lovely SMS and we were absolutely in love with it, tabaarakAllah. You write very well. May Allah guide many with your creative insight. But now we really wana know what happens next with Ahmad! :D So please don't prolong our suspense. Oh, and obviously the reason I ask for a translation is because we don't speak Malay :) we're from South Africa. Shukran.
ReplyDelete**tersentap**
ReplyDeletesaya pula tiba2 terfikir, permulaan yang kita pilih yang akan di kenang satu masa nanti. Dan permulaan itu kita yang lakar, kita sendiri yang pilih. Samada baik atau sebaliknya..